Complete your drawing first.

well...the real pic was like this...

try to complete the details and try to balance your proportions ( ~o wo)~
keep going, it's still a start

>>3 you have a really nice art style すごい Sugoi!!! :)

>>5 thnx i'll try! ^^

cute and it looks like a Japanese drew it, when I was in japan :3

Arigato all ^^

>>9 just in case people don't know what arigato means, it means "thank you" :3

*Cough cough* Arigatou *Cough cough*