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Graphic Design feedback. (7)

1 Name: Drake : 2014-03-27 21:15 ID:G22K7mZg (Image: 2550x3300 jpg, 359 kb) [Del]

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I'm commissioned to make a wedding photo album.

the guidelines were:
- red and beige as colors
- Classic style

Here's the Cover page and 2 examples of the interior pages.

Comments, opinions, advices and insults are appreciated.

2 Name: Drake : 2014-03-27 21:16 ID:G22K7mZg (Image: 2040x1320 jpg, 653 kb) [Del]

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3 Name: Drake : 2014-03-27 21:17 ID:G22K7mZg (Image: 2040x1320 jpg, 667 kb) [Del]

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4 Name: bread : 2014-03-27 21:35 ID:SNpoKpAM [Del]

seems a little plain and I'm not quite liking the gradient as much as I feel I should. I definitely feel the beige is a little off. Perhaps making it lighter would be nice, and making the red redder instead of orangish might look cool :^D

As for the formatting/positioning of the photos, it looks neat

5 Name: Drake : 2014-03-28 11:40 ID:CHu+jK0d [Del]

Thanks!

Yea I see what you mean about the beige. Plus, maybe working that way will also solve the radiant problem.

Tho I will for now keep the orangish since it give's a a more "sunshine" feeling to it. (IMO)

6 Name: bread : 2014-03-28 17:51 ID:SNpoKpAM [Del]

>>5 now that you mention it, the orange does look pretty sunshiney

good luck with this! hope the newlyweds like it :^D

7 Name: Drake : 2014-03-28 17:55 ID:pnI8QYX4 [Del]

He just replied and like it!

He just want the photos positions to be a little more dynamic. So I guess this job is pretty much done. Just copy paste and positioning. Thanks you bread!