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Feed back for Fayge? (4)

1 Name: Fayge : 2013-09-19 05:33 ID:d35QxKMf (Image: 3296x2256 jpg, 558 kb) [Del]

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i just resently started changing from an anime style to a slightly more realistic style and i just wanted some feedback on a quick sketch i did. still need to add shading.

2 Name: CoffeeCream : 2013-09-19 06:37 ID:uhiMXRXG [Del]

It looks good! If your wish is to draw something which looks realistic, maybe you should add some other details speaking about the face. More marked and "furry" eyebrows, maybe, and some eyelashes even If he's a guy... everybody has eyelashes. XD also the eyes are a bit too big to look realistic. The size of the neck is allright, but the shoulders are a bit too closed to each other and small... They aren't wrong, but they look a bit girlish and maybe a little too pointy XD the nose lacks of some details, it's still quite aniHopetyle here. The draw it the complex looks good, really, but, in my opinion the facial features are still a bit too cartoonish. I hope this is helpful enough! ^^

3 Name: CoffeeCream : 2013-09-19 06:38 ID:uhiMXRXG [Del]

*anime-style

4 Name: Fayge : 2013-09-19 21:08 ID:qiUxK/9Z [Del]

thanks for the feedback. i'll take your advice and see how it turns out. also i guess i got the shoulders right? meant to be a not very girly girl. thanks again.