The bluriness of the jacket and background compared to the sharpness of the mouth and chin is very awkward. The opposite of this is also a problem - the jacket had basically two shades of color and was very blunt in the wrinkles, yet the face had such soft shading. Considering all of the detail the clothes had, the unprominent nose and lack of eyes is weird. I think it looks decent, but I can't help but feel that it's very off-balance. It also isn't visually appealing when it comes to how you had such exaggerated clothing wrinkles yet couldn't be bothered to show even a single crease in the hand.
Moving on, are you going to post more? If this is the only piece you have to show us, please move your pictures to the art sharing thread, and let this thread die.
>>3 >>7 Don't hashtag. It makes you look extremely stupid.
