I'm drawing this right now, and I want to ask anyone for opinion. What is still missing / weird in this picture? Because I want to make the line art and color it. So I want to know what I need to repair in the sketch before I do so. :)

(She is Hatsune Miku from Vocaloid XD)

I forgot to say, it's okay to critics me. Is the hair strange? The eyes? Is the body too small? or anything. I won't get offended. And thank you very much. I will also post the finished picture after I'm done. ^^

>>2 The only thing that seems off about it is her pinky finger. I cant really explain that... It just looks strange.

>>3 It looks longer then it should be because of that line.
Though I get why you have the line going down so far from the pinky, it makes it look more like its detached from the hand entirely rather than being higher up then the other fingers. Could be fine though

this seems like a cool drawing^^!

Thank you! :D

The pinky finger, now that you mention it... And now I realise that the hand should be smaller.

Umm... I just can't seem to finish this pic. ;w;

Any idea on what to fill in the empty space she is looking at? She seems to be smiling at something, but I have no idea what to draw there. Sorry for asking.

And from now on I'll try to post my unfinished/finished drawing to this thread. ;w;

This is my original character from the story I've been writing (but never finished).

My friend draw this for me, I really like it, so I decided to give it some colors. <_<

Her face definitely doesnt look angry..

hello hanetsu-sama, i want to see your whole characters in that story and read your own composition.. nice artwork... ;)

>>10 My friend draw an angry emoticon there, so I thought she was angry. Thanks for your comment. :D

>>11 Thank you very much... xP *bows*
I'll post the male protagonist later then. The story though, I'm still not sure if it's good enough, so until it is better, I'll keep it to myself. >_>