Hello! I want to become an artist later on in my life and I think that some constructive critisism could help me become a better artist. Please feel free to be as harsh and blunt wth m, I won't get offended I'd actually appreciate it. Hope to hear some feed back.

>>2 Could you post more pictures? Many people on the Art board get pissed if a thread has only one piece of artwork, and it isnt difficult to steal someone elses work and attach your name to it.

alright one sec

One of my OC character sketches

First time using Bamboo Tablet

Another OC character sketch

Find me on deviantart if you don't believe this is my artwork. Link: http://palmtop-kitten.deviantart.com/

-grabby hands- How did you get so good? Other than like, practice. (Then again I can't do any better with practice). However, I'm wondering about the guy in the first picture without the black jacket (Don't know that game well, so I don't know names), how he could stand like that, since..it looks like it would take quite a bit of back and leg strength to stand like that. Good anyway~

Thank you ^-^ I now can see that Altair's (the guy without the black jacket) legs are out of proportion.

aha you guys should see the drawings she's made at school. shes an unbelievable artist, the best I've had the privilege to meet so far!~

OMG ZYSHI I've finall found you!! <3 well ... actually u found me lol ^-^

>>11 thank you btw ^-^

Welcome! :D

but, seriously, go check out her art in >>8 ;D

Hello kitten ^_^. Just want to say you got some pretty neat art up so far. I really enjoy assassins creed and I like the fanart on >>1. All of my art is done with pens and pencils and I have little experience with computer based art, so my critiques are pretty limited on that end. As far as the first pic goes, it seems like you'd make a great webcomic artist if you tried.

Now for the others. I'd really like to see >>5 finished as far as detailing for the rest of the body goes. It may be done already, just personally I'd love to see the rest have the great detail work that the head and hair have.

All-in-all you have a pretty nice thread going here. Keep up the good work and show me more!

thank you ^-^ i really do apreciate the feed back and ill be posting more later today

My version of Jem

A project I did for the book "All Quiet on the Western Front."

Just to reiterate that I'm not plagerizing find me on deviantart.com link: http://palmtop-kitten.deviantart.com/

feel free to be very opinionated when critiquing my work please I wouldnt mind some feedback

the jem one <3 so much better than the actual manga ♥

whats that manga called again???

Not Simple.

Ohhhh yea NOW i remeber :P i love that manga but the art in it was practically stick figures

Another project I did for "All quiet on the Western Front."

Wow. I can't critique much since you're MUCH better than me but I do have a suggestion.
Try saving your digital art as a .PNG instead of a .JPEG. It will improve the quality and make it less blurry around edges.

Other than that though, everything is fantastic. Your display emotion and lots of angles and movement like a pro.

Thank you ^^ i really do appreciate it when people critique my work. I wish i could upload it as a .TIFF but the site doesn't support it but i'll do that from now on thank you

Something I did for a friend

Seriously no one like legitamately critiques my work, I promise I won't get offended. PLEASE somebody, anybody CRITIQUE ny artwork.

The thing iiiiiiisssssss, people may just not want to critique right now.

>>29 Hair. Me gusta.

>>29 The guy is WAAYYYY Disproportioned. His arm is too short, and tapers down too quickly. His torso is too triangular and wide, and his neck is waaaayyyy too long. The way his neck, shoulder, and upper arm connect makes him look inhumanly deformed.
The girl is pretty good though, and i love your shading and line use on their legs.

>>30. There ya go. Critique. :3

>>32 THANK YOU!!! FINALLY!

>>30 His left arm looks small, aside from that I like his hair & eyes(you got style). Shading-wise wouldn't change a thing.

>>34 Thank you ^^ I'm going to edit it and re-post it

>>33 The reason why nobody critiques you is because all your stuff is amazing! Youre one of the best artists on here.

May i recruit you to draw for me? I have a manga idea, but cant seem to find an artist..

T.T (crying tears of joy) I would love too ^^

>>36 Yes of course your so nice ^-^

Alright I e-mailed you :)

>>40 YAAAYYY <3 I go replies nao. :)

yay ^-^ i'm like super stoked I've never gotten a request like this before

I edited it let me know if there's anything else I need to fix

I did this one for a project PLEASE CRITIQUE

>>44 That's very good, however, I'm wondering about how this guy is so pale. I think the eyes are parted a bit too much, and the mouth seems a bit low. Then again I don't know faces too well. What did you use to color this?

Thank you and hes so white because ... i don't have a skin colored marker Xp and I used craylola markers to color this lol

>>44 If you used Crayola Markers, then this is definitely an impressive feat. The part I liked most was the shading. The shading of the forehead and neck was well done. The only thing that's "iffy" with the picture is the position of the cross necklace. From the hair, you can tell that the wind is blowing to the right, but the cross is towards the left. While it's probably momentum that caused the cross to move in that direction, it doesn't quite fit the picture. All in all, the shading and coloring is nice. The flowers are strange and the cross is iffy, that's all.

/critique, end.

>>47 Thank you ^^ the flowers are actually poppies and are really hard to draw cause they're weirdly shaped. Thank you for the critique I really do appreciate it ^^

Kitten, why is your art so fucking amazing?
I love all the stuff on this thread.

>>49 T.T *crying tears of joy* eh your so nice ^^

>>49 but it took me a LOOOONNNG time to get were I am now if you want to see some of my older art you can find me on http://palmtop-kitten.deviantart.com/

Alright I've been working on a manga for school for a project and now I plan on making a cover for the manga. I'm going to be making rough drafts for the cover let me know which ones are your Favorites and that will be the one I color, finalize and use.

You're amazing at drawing. total envy..

Thank you but, there is deffinetly room for immprovement any constructive critisism

another idea for a cover the Manga is called "the Butterfly Room," PLEASE CRITIQUE and expect some more rough drafts

I really LOVE your line art!

The colouring would need some practice though! Try experimenting with colours and brushes~

Thank you ^^ I'll make sure I work on it :)

Alright, this is another rough draft cover for my manga "The Butterfly Room" sorry its taken so long ^^' please critique my work! I promise not to get offended you can be as mean as you want as long as I actually get some real feedback :P

>>58, Kitten, I hate you for being so amazing. You better give me a way to read the manga.

>>59 lol ^^ thank you Anu, I'll upload it to my deviantart when its finished :3

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Sorry I haven't posted anything in awhile. I've been busy turning in my Manga Manuscript for my personal project but, I'm done now so now I can draw for fun again ^^ Its Smokey, Francisca and Baker. A fan Manga based off the game left 4 dead :P Please Critique

Ah, those are pretty good artwork you've got there. The proportions are well drawn. Keep up the good work!

>>63 Thank you ^^

Derp

hehe.. your id almost says tsuki

>>66 Lol I just now realized that XD

Once again, they are wonderful. I love how you do mix manga with more realistic styles.

>>68 I've decided to try a new style thats unique but a little bit more detailed :P

>>68 Oh and thank you ^^

This is for my new Manga idea called "My Hidden Bird or Paradise." I went to my friends house and she has the most AMAZING markers I have ever used. I <3 them and I want to steal them X3 Please Critique

>>71 sorry for it being so pixelated but the site says it can't support .TIFF .PNG or .JPEG T^T

>>72 um.. yes it can.

>>73 well it won't let me it says the file is too large

:l then resize it ya durp.

>>71, The colours are amazing and this is damn detailed for markers. You are just plain amazing, Kitten. I love everything you post. But I still hate you T.T You make me feel so terrible about my art.

>>76 Thank you ^^ but eh don't hate me D: it just takes practice

>>75 Nopw it still won't let me T-T

>>78 then you resize more.

>>77 I hate you and love you at the same time.

>>80 this. just made my day XD

>>79 Nope still being stupid, I think its just my PC honestly

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Sorry I haven't put anything up in awhile but I never got to use my tablet during school and I can't upload my pencil sketches cause I don't have a phone but, now that I'm on summer break I can upload my art now! ^^ too lazy to do a background right now though ^^'

Please Critique >>84 please ^^

Well...Anu likes it...

I think the metal leg and the arms on the guy with the metal leg are a bit thin. The right shoulder doesn't look quite right, it just seems like the arm isn't connected quite right or something. The other guy's head seems short and his hand looks small.

thank you,
I'll fix the girl on top and the I see what your saying about the girl on bottom but shes supposed to look like shes looking up :P