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Step-By-Step Comic (48)

1 Name: Thiamor !yZIDc0XLZY : 2012-02-23 14:48 ID:hlCbA6T1 [Del]

This is going to be a forum-like game in which 1 person posts a comic page they created, and each person makes a comic page, based on the previous posters page.

It doesn't have to be in MS Paint, so you can use whatever programs you want. May that be hand drawing, then scanning and editing it later.

But I don't got my scanner hooked up, so I'll just start out with a story, only. Then you can do a comic based on that. Also you can mix seriousness with comical, or anyway you wish, into it.


"It is of the year, 3030, and the human race is but only a small glimpse of it's former glory. A mere sliver of what it once was. The war between the humanoid fraction, and the human race has wiped out a large fraction of their planet's natural resources due to constant attacks, and raids, on both sides.

The leader of the Human race, Captain Jericho Enrich, is on the verge of a breakdown, as the Humanoid forces eat away at his troops, and their morale.

But, a slight ray of hope, has shined down upon them all, when during the most recent of attacks, someone--or something-- appeared out of nowhere to save the day."



That is the starting story. Start your comic pages. No double posting images. You post, they post, you post again if no one else has after it.

Enjoy.


Also I made a whole new topic for it, because it wouldn't fit in the 'Crappy MS-Paint' topic.

2 Name: Composer !5/elwbL0iI : 2012-02-23 17:42 ID:FLm5uzNh (Image: 800x1500 jpg, 456 kb) [Del]

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Totalling 10 mins of work and reaching new levels of crapiness...

3 Name: Thiamor !yZIDc0XLZY : 2012-02-23 17:56 ID:hlCbA6T1 [Del]

I didn't say things are being eaten in the story. If you WANT it to be that way, go on ahead. Just saying I didn't say it.


But at-least TRY to stick to the actual story.

4 Name: Composer !5/elwbL0iI : 2012-02-23 18:13 ID:FLm5uzNh [Del]

>>3 "Humanoid forces eat away at his troops" I decided it would be better to take that sentence literately to add more drama.

5 Name: Thiamor !yZIDc0XLZY : 2012-02-23 18:19 ID:hlCbA6T1 [Del]

I can only imagine what it'd look like if someone took the time to remake that part into a very good piece of artwork. XD

6 Name: Composer !5/elwbL0iI : 2012-02-23 18:26 ID:FLm5uzNh [Del]

>>5 What're you trying to say? That is a good piece of artwork.

7 Name: Thiamor !yZIDc0XLZY : 2012-02-23 19:42 ID:hlCbA6T1 [Del]

>>6

"Took their time".

8 Name: Thiamor !yZIDc0XLZY : 2012-02-23 22:50 ID:hlCbA6T1 [Del]

Bump.

Come on. I thought you all in the Crappy MS Art topic wanted this. This also is to more-so show off creative skill. So TRY your best.

9 Name: SaintSoul : 2012-02-23 22:52 ID:vlcMDD8Z [Del]

I AM DOING THIS. As soon as I have enough motivation to sneak out of bed and search for my sketchbook. And the crappiness shall be in color, if possible.

10 Name: Thiamor !yZIDc0XLZY : 2012-02-23 22:55 ID:hlCbA6T1 [Del]

Nice. Thanks.

11 Name: SaintSoul : 2012-02-24 00:07 ID:vlcMDD8Z (Image: 1669x2153 jpg, 388 kb) [Del]

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You will not believe what I had to do to get this scanned. Okai, since it's in pencil I don't think much writing will be legible so:

Our story begins with 25 year old, Tobias Young, a resident of the slum neighborhood in the Human Kind's only nation, Allegiance (spelled it wrong in the comic, blind in the dark). Little does he know, Tobias may be the hero of this last civilized nation. (Ad libbing parts to make them sound better and make more sense.)
Tobias: Woah, what? Did I just see a caption bar..or..did that bartender slip something in my drink? Hero? Woah, what. The. Hell. (Censored in comic for some reason).
Caption number two: The small Allegiance is split into 2 parts, a rich and luxurious section, Arrow's Keep, and the poor, squalid area, Nest. (Have to ad this in, leaves out a vital part of the story lol) The leader of Allegiance is Captain Jericho Enrich, who is on the verge of panic as evil forces attack his military troops. Outside the nation, there lives a horrible place, the home of the Humanoids. A waste land formerly the mid-west of America (Yeah changed that, makes moar sense, sorry if the changing bothers you guys too much) the domain of the Humanoids is something even the strong military of Allegiance fears...These two places live at war with each other, battling the brawl that will never end, or will it?
Setting idea by: Thiamor
Comics strips by various Dollars members.
Notes: Side: "Blugh, shield your eyes", small character at bottom section: "That prologue was stupid, agreed?" (That's me, the self conscious comic artist.)
Well this is probably a pile of crap. Drew it late though. -hopes she wasn't ninja'd-

12 Name: Sharkie Pants !.pQQznQlsU : 2012-02-24 00:49 ID:0htFs/An [Del]

I sketched out a page that's meant to come after >>2, but since I was originally planning to make a nicer version (but didn't) on my computer I haven't added any dialog. I actually worked out what I wanted it to say, but since I won't get around to finishing it, I wanted to post it and see if anyone could work out what is going/make up their own dialog for the lulz.

>>11 beat me to posting the next page so I'll post my version in a link to help avoid confusion.

13 Name: SaintSoul : 2012-02-24 00:54 ID:vlcMDD8Z [Del]

>>12 Sorry about that, yourartisgoodIfeellikeanoviceyoureawesomepleaseteachmeyourways.

*Ahem* Well, looks nice, and toga.

14 Name: SaintSoul : 2012-02-24 00:55 ID:vlcMDD8Z [Del]

I mean loin cloth. Too confused to understand anything right now.

15 Name: Sharkie Pants !.pQQznQlsU : 2012-02-24 01:19 ID:0htFs/An [Del]

>>13 You don't have to be sorry about anything o uob
I wasn't planning on finishing that page anyway~

I actaully don't know if that guy is wearing a loin cloth or a skirt lol
I was just trying to copy the guy >>2 drew.

16 Name: Composer !5/elwbL0iI : 2012-02-24 05:03 ID:FLm5uzNh [Del]

>>15 I was making him wear underpants.

17 Name: Composer !5/elwbL0iI : 2012-02-24 05:05 ID:FLm5uzNh [Del]

From now on would it be easier to add the page numbers to each comic strip just to clarify the order they go in.

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19 Name: Composer !5/elwbL0iI : 2012-02-24 07:39 ID:FLm5uzNh (Image: 721x1023 jpg, 432 kb) [Del]

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It's be a shame not to use it, so Sharkie Pant's can be page 2 and SaintSoul can be page 3.

20 Name: Yuri fon Fabre : 2012-02-24 09:21 ID:H86J6819 (Image: 600x1000 jpg, 123 kb) [Del]

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Here my part to the story, using the method from the Composer.

All that must happen is that he gains super powers

21 Name: Composer !5/elwbL0iI : 2012-02-24 09:28 ID:FLm5uzNh [Del]

To simplify things I added all the photos into an album in the correct order. I'll try to keep it up to date with future pages.

Dollars: Step by Step Comic

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23 Name: Composer !5/elwbL0iI : 2012-02-24 10:31 ID:FLm5uzNh (Image: 800x1000 jpg, 338 kb) [Del]

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26 Name: Thiamor !yZIDc0XLZY : 2012-02-24 13:08 ID:hlCbA6T1 [Del]

>>1
>>24
>>25
" No double posting images"

Also this is TOO random. It doesn't keep up with ANYTHING. It'd probably work better in the MS Paint thread, no offense.

I'm just trying to keep this more organized by keeping it at-least with my plot and having people follow the little rules provided.

27 Name: Marcy !IPLEVNCIlg : 2012-02-24 13:16 ID:AgWL9DBa [Del]

>>26 HOLY SHIT 0_0 I forgot about the double posting!!! -goes to delete renaom pages-

28 Name: Marcy !IPLEVNCIlg : 2012-02-24 13:16 ID:AgWL9DBa [Del]

*random

29 Name: Thiamor !yZIDc0XLZY : 2012-02-24 14:16 ID:hlCbA6T1 [Del]

Bump.

30 Name: Marcy !IPLEVNCIlg : 2012-02-24 15:01 ID:AgWL9DBa [Del]

bump

31 Name: Thiamor !yZIDc0XLZY : 2012-02-24 18:55 ID:hlCbA6T1 [Del]

Bump.

32 Name: Ravana۞ ☆!HltySaVY5g : 2012-02-24 18:56 ID:R4dm86Vs [Del]

BUMPER...


STICKERS~

33 Name: The Composer !5/elwbL0iI : 2012-02-25 09:32 ID:iK2EpPTl [Del]

>>26 I think the plot is developing perfectly. First you have the world leader in distress as his men are being eaten, when a man in underpants and a cape shows up. The world leader offers him his own underpants to save the world and the man agrees. It then goes into a flashback to how it all started to which he somehow gains super powers by shoving a firework up his ass.

It started in an epic Gurren Laggan style (Shows a preview of the last episode or so)and now you get to slowly unlock the mystery of Tobias Young's rise to fame and how he became a legend and the one hope to world has...

34 Name: sleepology !CHs4eVJ3O2 : 2012-02-26 13:10 ID:LUE7U5pV [Del]

Bump

35 Name: The Composer !5/elwbL0iI : 2012-02-26 16:22 ID:FLm5uzNh [Del]

>>34 Come on sleepology, nobody else is bothering, I'm sure you can make an amazing comic page.

36 Name: Sleepology !4a6Vun8zuw : 2012-02-26 16:35 ID:TlaBc/If [Del]

Im sure i can, if you give me a setup

37 Name: The Composer !5/elwbL0iI : 2012-02-26 17:17 ID:FLm5uzNh [Del]

Well he just shoved a firework up his ass and it exploded. So somehow you've got to turn that into him getting/discovering his super powers.

38 Name: Thiamor !yZIDc0XLZY : 2012-02-26 20:37 ID:Dg2UCwQl [Del]

Bump.

39 Name: The Composer : 2012-02-27 07:07 ID:oc92s/zr [Del]

Get on this Sharkie Pants before the thread becomes dead and we lose the epic tale of Tobia Young.

40 Name: Sharkie Pants !.pQQznQlsU : 2012-02-27 08:21 ID:0htFs/An [Del]

>>39 I don't have many ideas to transition from fireworks up his ass --> getting/discovering superpowers :I;;

41 Name: The Composer !5/elwbL0iI : 2012-02-27 09:36 ID:FLm5uzNh [Del]

>>40 It'd probably be easier to think of a power to give him then come up with the reason.

42 Name: sleepology !CHs4eVJ3O2 : 2012-02-27 09:42 ID:aqemcirn [Del]

Something involving flight would probably make the most sense. Then again, we arent about making sense, so lets have him shoot sonic booms out of his butt

43 Name: Yuri fon Fabre : 2012-02-27 09:47 ID:H86J6819 [Del]

I think sonic booms are the best way to go with this

44 Name: The Composer !5/elwbL0iI : 2012-02-27 10:17 ID:FLm5uzNh [Del]

Maybe the firework wedged into his sphincter allowing him to shoot himself like a firework.

45 Name: Shitlord : 2012-02-28 09:31 ID:2kFULxbm [Del]

BUMPPPPPPP!

46 Name: The Composer !5/elwbL0iI : 2012-02-29 15:16 ID:FLm5uzNh [Del]

Bump. Come on guys, how about immortality. He blows his anus up and discovers he's immortal. That's easy to work with.

47 Name: Thiamor !yZIDc0XLZY : 2012-03-01 19:02 ID:krur/N0k [Del]

Bump.

48 Name: Thiamor !yZIDc0XLZY : 2012-06-10 19:41 ID:1Ocpq01Y [Del]

Gonna bump my old topic back up.