Soo its a bit bloody but I kinda liked it.. lol. I did edit it a bit on the computer but the only thingi did was add the red edge.

And I did draw this

They look pretty good ^^

Thank you very much :) Any constuctive critisism?

8D that is great! ure an epic artist! >:3
idk about anyone else, and i might be wrong, but a few of those anime people look like hiwatari from dnangel =w=b

cunstruktive curitisism? mmm...

the first pic was great, the hand was just a little...odd? or maybe just bigger than it should be, idk it looked a little queer
second pic was okay, nothing i really could say was really awkward about it or anything
third pic...her head looks a little small, that or her boobs are MONGO. and her left arm or from viewer's perspective (right) looked a little longer than it should've been.
the fifth pikuture looked like he really needed an ear! :V i knuz doing profiles are herd.... U_Ub hm.hm.

otherwise you did a great job! 8D keep up deh gud werk

Thank you very much!! haha :)

I found it Losafox! You have some pretty awesome art.
do you have a deviantart?

Yes I do! but I'm not on often, and I actually made a new one that im going to start using.

>>13 sweetness I have one to. My name is the same there too

Yeah.. my old one is.. naru-inu-kyo-girl ...... anyway my new one is Losafox.

Comparing >>5 to >>7 ...
The latter was done really well, proportions all matched up with relative correctness so you do know what you're doing, but then I looked back at the other one...

Her chin is enormous. Or perhaps her mouth is about a foot too high up her face. If you measure the space between your mouth and the tip of your chin, there is no way that worked the way you intended. And again, I'm only comfortable saying this because >>7 indicates you do know how that works and it was just overlooked.

Kaori's criticism is pretty spot on too, despite the fact that she's Kaori.

Pretty good work though, keep it up :U

>>16 THAT WUZ HER MOUTH? T^T im so sorreh Losaaaaaaaa

i thut it wuz her nose er sumthun T-T >facecar<

Regardless of the size of your mouth, it's still cute XD

Haha I got tired of working on that one so I just left the mistake. That was a quick doodle and so it's not the best. :p Thank you for your constructice critisism, it is appreciated :)

My favourite one is the first one lol

Thats my favorite too!! haha :)

lol it's pretty awesome!
would you mind if I did something similar?

No I wouldn't mind lol. Just don't rip it off completely :p This is actually a character of mine I created lol. Her name is Losa XD

lol no it will be differentish lol. Well for one it will be a guy and he won't be smiling lol. XD

Haha ok XD Lol Losa was happy and nervous about how she got the blood on her hands :p

lol XD

haha actually all of these pictures except for two I think are a character of mine.. each with their own story.

These are pretty good ^^' Do you have any more?

Those are great.

>>5 reminded me of Kanon, for some reason.

>>28 I will eventually lol. I have very old ones..somewhere.

>>29 Haha I dont know who that is...

We want (demand) more lol.
when you have some that is lol

WILL DO!! haha :)

Awesome ^_^;

The fifth picture looks like GTO to me. If anyone knows what I mean by that...

Great drawing by the way, almost forgot to say.

>>30
>Kanon
>who

Lol only two if these pictures is based off of something. The fourth one is just a random pic I saw then drew, that last one is from the manga Fruits Basket and it's Tohru Honda's parents.

I'm not really a new user anymore.. but I've drawn since I've created this thread haha. Sorry this on is kkind of morbid O.o

Sorry, but I can't agree with the past criticisms. I think these aren't good at all in any aspect. The only semi-decent one was >>7. The eyes are too high on all of them. The proportions are so off that the pictures are almost creepy looking, but not in a good way. The blood doesn't look realistic. In the first one, the proportions are off and her hand is completely see through. In the second one, the mouth and eyes are off. In the third one, her tits are bigger than big, her head is really damn small, and her legs seem to go on for eternity, and she looks really fat, as well. In the fourth one, again, proportions are off, the mouth is so high it looks like her nose turned into a mouth and is biting the guy, and the shoulders are too small. In the fifth one, just every proportion is off, again. In the sixth one, I don't even. How did you go from making such horrible drawings to that. The seventh one is off; everything is unrealistically rounded, the eyes are too high, the hand is huge (especially that one finger), and the blood doesn't look real at all. In the eighth one, they're both really, really short with huge rear ends and extremely small feet. It's creepy in a bad way, even worse than normal furry pictures. In the ninth one, I don't even. I'll just smile and hope you intended to put a giant neck on a really skinny guy with apparently nothing in his pants. The tenth one is semi-decent. I don't draw furries, so I couldn't give anymore criticism.

Alright, I think I'm done. You've got all my criticisms. Please try to learn a bit of anatomy before you continue to draw; everything is really... off.

Well I never said I was a master now did I? And I was like.. 14 when I drew half of these pictures. So sorry it seemed as if they offend you. You must be much better than me so I won't challenge you. And I said constuctive critisism, not just telling me things are wrong. I wanted something more along the lines of art tips from other artists.

Draw more people from life rather than anime or manga styled.
Take whatever >>41 said you did wrong and study them. Work on improving those parts of your drawings.
Look up tutorials on Deviantart too. They're very helpful

There. Criticism turned constructive.

Bambi can be a bit ... harsh but she means well. I'm an anime artist too and personally my biggest challenge is mostly making sure everything is proportionate. Proportions and positionng is key whe drawing. when somethiong is out of proportion it can ruin the whole drawing so heres my Constructive Critisism:
>>1 Your have the basic head shape down but the face doesn't fit to well in the head. Also your hands are detailed nicely but the anatomy of the hand is off the palm is too small and the fingers are too long. Also the hand is usually around the same size of the head so you hand is too big.

>>3 This one is one of your better ones, everything is pretty proportionate but once again your chin is a little off and your mouth in't symmetrical

>>4 this one is pretty proportionate too but (not to sound weird or anything) her chest is HUGE idk if that was intentional or not but it looks out of place. Her face though, I feel, is very well done.

>>5 this one is also out of proportion around the face and head area. The guys jaw line is too high up(in anime for the younger men its usually lower down) and the girls face doesn't fit the shape of the head. The guys neck and shoulders look well done but the girls shoulder looks off.

>>6 (sorry I know I may sound mean through all of these but I'm not trying to be) this one is out of proportion, the chin and nose is too big and the mouth is too small.

>>7 this one is pretty well done. the hand is decently proportional the only two things I noticed was that her chin juts outward too much and her shoulder is too small.

Thats all the critiquing I have time for, just keep practicing and you'll get better.
ps: I used to do furries myself and the horse one is pretty well done I like the detail on the face but the head to too big compared to the body.keep up the good work!

>>44 Thank you very much ^_^ I appreciate that! I mean I really do, I'm not being sarcastic.

But I'm not sure you guys noticed.. I created this thread I think it was July of last year.. And the art I posted then was old too.. The newer posts are slightly newer drawings and I'll apply what you've said to them.

your welcome ^^ I'd love to see some of your new art <3 keep up the good work!

>>42 That was constructive criticism :|

I took my time to write up that post to help you, and I expect you to be grateful; I don't expect to come back to this thread and find you complaining about it.

>>47 " Constructive criticisms are often suggestions for improvement"

All you did was "NO THIS SHIT IS WRONG. AND THIS SHIT. AND THIS SHIT. NOW GO DRAW AGAIN."

That was what I could get from skimming, try providing, I dunno, some advice when you're criticizing of the constructive kind. Otherwise, it's just regular asshole criticism.

>>41
Obviously you are an asshole. If you dislike this genre of art, you shouldn't be viewing or commenting. You want realistic? Get off this page. Constructive criticism doesn't consist of completely bashing a young artist's work, it helps them become a better artist, but you're not doing that are you? You're just an uneducated, blind, rude, and uninteresting nobody who has nothing better to do than find a website like. this one and smash on someones art. I have an idea! Get a life.

>>49

It may have not HELPED them what they said, but you must be new to not know that Barabi is one of those main people on here who help organize this whole site. You should learn about the person before trying to tell them what they do on this site.

>>50 I don't see how what Barabi said had anything to do with organization, so that shouldn't matter in this case. I would have preferred if she had just said, "I don't like it" instead of dragging on about how it was wrong. Eh, oh well.

Everyone starts somewhere, so if the art is bad then yeah it's bad. Seriously though, >>49, Barabisama did critic a bit harshly and I do agree with *insertnamehere*. Starting off with "Sorry, but I can't agree with the past criticisms. I think these aren't good at all in any aspect." is never the sign of something nice. Just saying what they should work on is okay. Short, sweet and to the point.

Cause I do agree that the eyes to nose to mouth ratio were off and need work. Plus if she (Losa) drew them at 14 and they look decent like >>5 does. Then in >>7 you can see a bit of growth in her drawing skills.

>>51
My post was directed at the person saying she comes on just to fuck with people, more or less. It had nothing to do with the actual topic at hand.

I'm just going to interject to say that age has nothing to do with drawing

I'm fourteen years old and I draw plenty fine.

>>54 I do agree with that statement considering I just turned 16 but, not everyone has as amazing art skills as Pineapplez.

>>54 Or so others say.
You do draw good, just a true Artist should NEVER say that about themselves.

>>54 That's when I started actually trying to draw O.o .... So I guess I could say these were my art beginnings..

>>56
I never said I was good
I said I draw just fine
Besides, if I always claim I suck ass then it just annoys myself and those around me

>>57 It IS about experience rather than age, but it really just depends on the person

If you keep practicing, I'm sure you'll improve a lot.

Bump

I like them i wish i could draw that good

>>59 Thank you for saying you like them!!!

I'll jump on the bandwagon and say that >>5 was nicely drawn.

But the horse creeps me out.

>>5? I meant >>7. 5 was ok too, but 7 was better.




That gotdang horse.

>>48 I DID give advice. I said what I thought was wrong, albeit bluntly, and said how you could fix it. Study the anatomy of the body. It would fix almost everything I commented on.

I wasn't saying she was a horrible artist; I was saying that I didn't like what she posted, and I didn't agree with the half-arsed cricisms posted earlier. Saying, "it's nice," or, "this is my favorite!!" isn't constructive at all.

>>49 I /love/ this style of art when it's done right. However, you can't draw badly and then try to hide behind the genre or style. You still need to have proper proportions.

>>52 Criticism doesn't have to be nice - it has to be honest and helpful.

>>51 That wouldn't be constructive, no would it? The whole point of me even commenting was to tell you what was wrong and how you can fix it. There's no point in whining about how I don't like it and then not saying why.

>>64 now would*

>>64 You didn't tell me how to fix it. And even if citisism doesn't have to be nice, it doesn't have to be rude and obnoxious either.

>>63 I missed this one, ok, well fine. I suppose that could loosely be considered constuctive critisism. However you were rude. Bluntness is fine, rudeness is not. But like I said, eh, oh well. I'm fully aware the people can be quite a bit ruder when they are not face to face with someone.

>>64 I never said it had to be nice either.

>>67
Actually whatever they want to SAY to you is fine. It depends on how YOU take it. You're going to either have to get used to the fact people WILL most likely be rude to you, or leave (or, complain about it, and not leave, but that won't change anything.)
Because rudeness is all around us, on this site, but it's only rude in the eye of the beholder. But it won't change.

This is how the site SEEMS to work. People are rude, nice, mean, cruel, crude, and obnoxious. We have different personalities on this site, and you're just going to have to acknowledge that fact, and get used to it, if you plan to be on here.

>>69 I've been on here before, it's not like I'm new, thanks.

Honestly, can we get off this topic? This is supposed to be where art is posted not where people argue over stupid nonsense.

>>67 No, it wasn't particularly rude. It was just blunt.

If I was being rude, I would have come in here and flamed in a post so long Misu must have written it. I would have thrust continuous swear words at you and complained over and over again, and then I would have left you crying on the virtual ground of BBS without giving you a single piece of advice. That's what I consider rude, and what I said was far from it.

>>70 Considering you started the arguement by taking butthurt to constructive crticism, I like to think you shouldn't be the one calling it a stupid arguement :V

Unless you bring up another argueable point, this is my last post. Continue posting your art, and hopefully you'll take my crticism and put it in your head instead of your arse and learn from it.

In her defense, Barabi's first statement in this thread was the equivalent of "all of this art is shit" (not good in any aspect). Doesn't help that there's a lot of thinly veiled condescension going on here.

Thiamor's "you must be new here, Barabi is a veteran (and an organizer? The hell?) and you can't tell her what to do, bluh, learn about her, we're all a barrel of dicks," is also pretty damn stupid.

Stick to the subject.

All of that aside,

There's nothing I can say that wasn't already said. Sticking by Kaori's and Suto's post. Proportions and shapes are the issue here, so maybe try checking out profiles. Practice on consistency and you should be well on your way to becoming an artist.

>>73
You must be partially blind, to think that is how the fuck it was said.

It was directed at some fail of a troll, that basically told her she only comes on to fuck with people. Unless they were new (and pretty much a super moron), they had no reason to say that.

>>72
>>69

Shh, you two are being assholes and derailing the thread. Bambi gave some half-assed criticism, Thiamor mistook a comment, both of them have apparently gone full retard to justify themselves.

This is not a thread to try and convince anyone to give any fucks regarding how something was meant or how credible some member is.

End of discussion, back to Losa's art.

On topic: I dislike most of your art. It's a little because the first post gave me a terrible impression, the topic being a pseudo-furry with a very flat "blood" component to it.

Drawing blood well is a difficult thing, as I am not an artist myself I can't really give you a step-by-step advice on how to improve on it. However, the blood you see that's generally high quality has almost a watery effect to it. Are you familiar with how to imply ripples in a body of water? Giving it the illusion of having undulations?

Blood is kind of like that, in a darker fashion and a little more randomized in it's "spill" pattern. Try experimenting with using various shades of red/black in the blood to give it more of a texture, instead of appearing as if someone had been recently splashed with Hawaiian punch.

That said, most of the following pictures were furries - I don't like furries, I have nothing to contribute to drawing furries better; mainly because I don't spend any time looking at furries, so I have no frame of reference for how a well drawn furry looks.

>>7 is by far the best piece in this thread in my opinion though. The proportions were well done, and I'm impressed at how you handled drawing the hand - Hands, and feet in some cases, are supposedly some of the most difficult things to draw well. Whenever I try to draw a hand, I end up with some kind of jellyfish with sausage hanging off it.

It's not pretty.

I think someone made a comment about never-ending legs earlier? Having read the sailor moon manga when I was younger, I am incapable of viewing any legs as being terrible misproportioned or too long.

Naoko Takeuchi made a goddamn career out of this. It's terrifying to look at Mar's legs now, but if you can make it work for you... Well, more power to you I suppose.

>>75 Haha I'm beginning to understand a lot of people on here don't like furry art, and most of the others I added are old. I'll be adding some hopefully more proportional art soon.. I think. Whenever I color it and get a scanner. Oh and thank you.

>>73 Thank you,too

>>72 The only thing you really said was that it was shit and tp study anatomy... Which technically I'm already doing so thanks anyway.

Really everyone should stop arguing. this is a thread for Losa to post her art not for people to get into an argument :( I'd have to agree that Bambi was harsh but, this isn't the place for people to be chewing each other out. This thread is Losa's art thread were she can post her art and hopefully get some constructive critisism.

The scanner drained the color a lot.. the backround behind the girl is supposed to be light blue and behind the boy it's supposed to be orange. I haven't drawn in a little while so I figured I might try to get back into it. anywaay enjoy.

The fox is waaay to big on thid picture, and I haven't really done much in the way of a backround.. this picture is not finished I suppose.

the fox is so cute!:)

Haha thank you :)